All Comments on 'Kate: Pounding Bodies'

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AvidreaderinozAvidreaderinozover 7 years ago
Nice

Thanks for a well constructed read

KingCuddleKingCuddleover 5 years ago
More deeply felt, honestly shared, exquisite storytelling!

Lucky Chris!

A necessary note: "colleague"

But I forgive you...cuz I adore "nippily" :+PPPPP

Kissses...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Some of the best writing on the site but ...

You write so well and your protagonists are credible and sympathetic, but the sex is awfully templated. I understand there are people who do not particularly like oral or anal, but there are tens of millions of people who do make this part of their sexual repertoire and enjoy the incredible and unique sensations that these can add. I don't know how old the author is, but all the heroines are college age. Perhaps in 20 years there will be a story about a mature woman who in her 40s has a lover who can help her get past her inhibitions and learn to enjoy some of the best things in life.

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I like writing about nice, even romantic, sex with nice people. In most cases my writing is inspired by people I have met and experiences I have had or watched others have. Sometimes the description of the person I include in my stories is almost recording a mental photograph...

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