All Comments on 'Kate's Awakening'

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SynnDeeSynnDeeover 11 years ago
Enjoyed

I would like more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Nice start

Has good potential for a longer storyline.

GingerVyeGingerVyeover 11 years ago
sexayyyyy

mhmm this was great, she is always in control but needs release. I liked the background details of the characters, this makes the story rich and full.

I have been in New Orleans at night, it is so sensual and magical. You captured this in your story.

Thank you for taking the time to write, I would like more.

lusherlusherover 11 years ago
nice turn of the tables

It's exciting when a predator turns prey. This was sensual and hot; I enjoyed the NOLA setting and characters a lot and hope you plan to submit more stories in this vein.

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