All Comments on 'Kate's Capture Ch. 04'

Zap! Waiting for more..

i was so bored and took a chance that you possibly had something new out and low and behold...this one was out! i was so excited and knew it would only be awesome...once again you've outdone yourself, i love your work and how you display and bring a story to life without all the major techy stuff or dumb stuff...just a direct and hot hot hot story with actually a story line that can be followed and leaves one only desiring more...please continue on as soon as possible, i will be searching for the next chapt.may i ask if you have a website about your writings and are you consider being published in ebooks or actual paper, i would gladly pay to get anything you wrote...waiting with baited breath...a fan in Texas...naynay

This story has captured me. I can't wait for more. Great job! Thank you.

I can't wait to read more. This is one of the best I have read so far. Thankyou

Wow !

. . . That Doc gave Heather something to induce lactation. Breasts don't naturally give milk until after the release of the placenta.

That's my only issue. This is otherwise fantastic.

She has to be broken

"then the steel plates on the floor came to life" "The tiles were too small for the whole of her foot." There it's a bit unclear what is happening.

How is this meant to be sexy? Torture and porn do not belong together.

Human trafficking is very very real issue, to treat it as a sexual fantasy is really fucked up. The problem with this story is that it’s too realistic, if you find this kind of thing sexy that’s your prerogative but it reads like a horror story. It needs to be detached from reality- different time period/ post apocalypse/ ffs even alien abduction or different planet is better than glorifying actual slavery because it really isn’t sexy.

You can try and hide things in plain sight but honestly If this were this real then what you have are 3 girls, one to be whored out until death, another to be a breeder until death; being made pregnant over and over with the babies stolen away from her. Then the last girl who is (apparently) going to be a masochist sex slave - again this is until death. Never to be free, never to see their families or friends ever again. When there are no limits people become disposable commodities there’s nothing sexy about ANY of that. Have you considered therapy or counselling?