All Comments on 'Kate's First BJ'

Look forward to seeing more of your work. Maybe a lesson in fucking next time?

I was really into the story, but found time jumps and whatnot a bit confusing at times. I really liked the idea, but I'm not sure it all came across. Get an editor and you're home free!

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Both hilarious, hot and sweet.

Congrats on managing to achieve all!

I wish I could tell you what was so good about this, but I don't think I can find the words! So sweet and so, so sexy at the same time!

A sexy and funny read ...

I think you captured how a young woman like Kate would feel just right.Very good.

Good premise.

Blowjobs, yes. But not much else. Kate never got her little boobs felt or played with ot sucked. Her pussy got no action either.

And the roommate didn't seem to get off on watching and coaching. Why no playing with her own pussy while watching? Why no coaching the boyfriend to tell Kate what he liked, and what he liked better, and best while getting blown?

Why no attempt buy the boyfriend to give Kate an orgasm?

Four stars.