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All Comments on 'Kate's Story Ch. 01'

by Robert_Anthony

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Yupperz14Yupperz14over 11 years ago
I like it

I didn't like all the stalling though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
please more

title says it all looking forward to more of Kate's adventures

Remain_in_shadowRemain_in_shadowover 11 years ago
I liked it, too

Even the stalling. Try to keep the narrative from drifting inside Grantham's head. Or just tell it from his POV and keep it out of Kate's.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Yum.....

I loved the detail.... hurry more chapters, please master?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MORE!!

So hot cant wait for ch. 2

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
R_A come back!

Loved it ~ It's time to come back and continue Kate's Story! Please!

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Have been a member of Literotica for years, and have submitted numerous Femdom stories under the name MALIBUMAN666. Am now looking to improve my writing with the long term aim of writing commercially and so am starting afresh and will be writing in the third person from now on...