All Comments on 'Kate's Test Ch. 04'

by PussyWorshipper

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
I liked it.

This is certainly worth continuing - looking forward to seeing the new piercing getting put to use :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Totally AWESOME!

OMG!OMG!OMG! This is simply one of the hottest stories on the site! I am so grateful that you decided to continue on with this story! Thank you for making my cunt purr in delight!

smegger_29smegger_29almost 14 years ago
Alas it's a failure

Sadly this story set has followed the same pattern as all unofficial copies. It's a dud compared to the original.

Mostly because your english skills are somewhat lacking, I noticed sentence structure errors indicating English is a second language without even looking at your biography. Perhaps if you had written it in your native german the wording would be better, however i somewhat doubt that as I explain below:

What irked me the most is that you go the character personalities COMPLETELY wrong. You played claire out as a sociopath and Kate out as a stereotypical cowardly sub. Which niether are. The originals had some form of realism to them, a perfect example is the forced piercing, if that happened IRL claire would get locked up for GBH and the piercer would aswell and would permanently lose her liscence and reputation.

You have unfortunately soiled the story you hoped to compliment, casting dirt upon its name by taking it to unrealistic and quite frankly stupid extremes. Kate's test is one of my absolute favourites as the author is a near perfect wordsmith. It's like an amatuer trying to paint more paintings in the style of da vinci or picasso.

You've basically pissed in the flowerbeds instead of watering them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
To smeg the frigin prick

you comment is a frigin joke right? Yu cunt. Now I's gonna go bomb yur stroys. FUCK OFF OR

MartinimanMartinimanover 12 years ago
🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Simply marvelous & diabolical! I am really enjoying how Claire thinks!

fitntrimfitntrimover 5 years ago
very hot

one of my favorite stories, tho I usually don't go for non-consent

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