by abroadsword
Loved it! Wonderful over the top stuff, with an excellent central character.
Couple of quibbles: one or two modern words (jism: maybe in fact an old word); also the consummation left me a bit confused & not quite satisfied... a bit of rewrite may make the ending stronger.
If you do not continue this story I will hunt you down...
RIDICULOUS - but I love it! It works - if it does - because it is so over-the-top. Any less so and ... a 1 or a 2