All Comments on 'Katherines first fuck at college'

by MichelleRheimes

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fukensplooginfukensplooginalmost 18 years ago
nice build up

but what happened at the end? did you get tired? there should have been more fireworks!

walkingeaglewalkingeaglealmost 18 years ago
Great little story!

Great job! I hope too see lots more from you! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good start

Good story, but was distracted by poor sentence structure and grammer. Work on the technical stuff and add to the ending more, and this story will shine.

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