All Comments on 'Katie Ch. 01'

ZERO incest or taboo, please post stories in the proper area or don't post them

Nice start, its amazing sometimes where find our heart drawn. keep it going Lyric

Build-up. Apparently, Lyrics is labeling her story for the whole of the series rather than the individual story. I don't have a problem with that. It's an interesting story; good characterization, flaws in the protagonist, and illustrating that he isn't a sexual novice. I liked it.

I love this story & I love the fact that you are takeing your time in telling the story. There is no need to rush right into incest. Please continue writing this & other stories & disregard the comment of the first person below. I think that it is great the way it is.

You are taking a thought-out path. Dont let anyone divert you. Well done!

John

Don't let anyone rush the story that is in your head.

I think you have an interesting buildup going on here. You threw me off track with the jumping back and forth between Katie and Claire. Interesting. I'll be looking for more.

The only thing is it was just too short. We didn't get to really know the main characters yet, and the chapter is over.I hope that the next chapter will move the story forward more than the first one. It won't be too bad if the chapters keep coming every day, but if there's a long time between chapters it makes it hard to remember what the story is all about.......Rich

i agree no incest or taboo so wrong area also get a dam editor you keep using the wrong words they are spelled right but wrong for example "SHE TOOK OFF HER ROBE AND THREW IT ACROSS THE ROBE"that should be room get an editor and do a rewrite and never post another story without an editor

Great story. Disregard the 2 airheads who say it is in the wrong section. I agree with those who say this first story is just the buildup for the rest to come. Please continue with this story as is. You should write the next chapter asap.

This is a very unusual start to an incest story. Your writing style is quite refreshing. You seem to be able to move effortlessly between sexy, cheeky and emotional. I especially enjoy the cheekiness (Mike at the recital trying to hide his shoes)

Make sure that others' comments dont affect your style too much; just be your own writer. I agree with the those who believe that this a great start.

Very good work so far. I hope you dont make us wait too long for the continuation.

Great start and interesting too. I'm eager to know what will happen next. Will he choose Katie or Claire. We know he loves his sis, byt he had 'fun' with Claire. Lets see where you take this story. Good job and thanks for the story.

I agree that this is a great start to what should be a great story. I hope you will write the next chapter soon.

A very curious start. The story really drew me in. I had no idea where it was going and was pleasantly surprised when it got there. Good work. But dont make us all wait too long for the next part.

I hope you will write the next chapter soon. I love reading this story, it is great.

Fantastic story, I hope the rest is as great as this first part. Please continue with this story soon. We are all waiting with baited breath.

Can we have the next part please? It's really frustrating waiting for anything half decent on this site anymore.

A very fine start

Biggest load of rubbish I have ever read

I remember what having a sister like that was like. Imagine growing up with a sister that looked like a cross between Sally Field and Marissa Tomei. I was in a special kind of hell during my 'wonder years'. My reality was so different as she was all that & I well am not so much. Probably read these stories to imagine what might have happened if I was more like the guys in them,