All Comments on 'Katie's Cuck'

Thank you. You could have done without a lot of the 'he said/she said' tags but overall it was very enjoyable. Five stars.

Not a bad story. Writing was good. Age of people don't talk much like that irl, but this is a hot story that has a lot of potential. keep writing.

this is a great beginning to a new story series. Katie is really hot and sexy, i love how she dominates ad humiliates richard. the foot worship was particularly hot. i cant wait until she officially cucks him and has him serve her and her bull

She can't make him a cuckold. They are married. At least try and understand what you're writing about.

Great story, please keep writing!

please continue their story

The theme was good and you developed it pretty well, but the dialogue seemed very stiff and unrealistic to me. (Maybe read the dialogue out loud to yourself as you write to see how it sounds?...) Also, the way the woman went from being on a normal at-home date to full dominant mode was also a bit too unrealistic. All that being said, it's a pretty decent effort. (Not really a cuckold story, given their relationship, but no big deal.)