All Comments on 'Katie's Roommate'

i love the opening sections. got a little cooled off by the boy/boy stuff, but the potential for a hot story was certainly there.

I really like everything you write Laffalot but this story is one of my favourites. So much easier to find it here than have to go through all those posts at Mistress Destiny's.

I loved this! My ultimate fantasy would be to somehow get Katie's (the petite submissive) mother involved. Maybe she would call Katie on the phone , curvy dom Ashley answers as Katie is licking her ass" Katie is eating right now, call back later". Then later when the mother shows up to protect her little girl, her petite face is sat on by Ashley's huge ass. Ashley then forces the mother to watch her baby get owned!

while it still something you can enjoy as a sex story, it doesn't really show any difference then most of it type. the bad people will always have all things go their way and the victims never react like real people. So I am ultimately left disappointed and angry at the end.

I really enjoyed this, it's nice to see one person really dominate a scenario and avoids the same old morality plays where the 'bad guy' has to be punished. I'd love to see a sequel maybe with Ash even more control of Zack and Chris.

I really enjoyed this story. Great detailed and visual writing. I read this at place well I probably should have not! :)

Pretty damn intense.

Chris should torture and execute them.

Great story!!!! Vey good visualization and charters. Added to my favs ;-)

More please

Honestly one of the hottest stories ever written