All Comments on 'Katie's Visit'

Wonderful again - than you so much.

Nick

I have ready the two stories as suggested.

Brilliant, you are a wonderful story teller.

An unusual outline but cleverly executed.

The only point - if writing as a man you would not go into such detail about the three ladies outfits. Most men would not be able to do so and very few would even care what the ladies wore.

Otherwise magnificent.

I enjoyed all of the detail in your story. It really adds to the experience. I would like to enjoy that myself. Lucky Fella!

I loved part 2. And the first part, The Granny’s Next Door, even more. It’s very well written and eroticly charged. Looking forward to more of your stories.

L O R

AMAZING STORY!!!!! 7 STARS!!!!