All Comments on 'Katrina to Kat'

Great build up so far, but such a tease!! I can't wait to see what she does with her weekend.

I'm, really sorry. The story, would work better, for me, if you used commas, properly, and sparingly. Nice, build-up.

I hope; no... I cannot wait to see where you are going with this... Please don't keep us waiting long! Awesome and don't be put off by "anonymous" comments, They are people who only know how to criticise instead of writing anything of there own!

Well written, thoughtful piece. Looking forward to page two. TL

Nice build up.

But the word is 'drawer' not 'draw'.

Delicious tease. Xxxxx

Really enjoying this series but you need to get someone to read over before posting. Your use of comma's is distracting from the story as at the moment you seem to almost use them randomly which makes it harder to read the story at full flow. However, please don't take this criticism to heart and I can't wait for chapter four.

This isn't a story I would normally read, but I'm curious about the author.

And all in all it's a nice start, I give it 5 stars.

Gay Kat