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I stood beside my car outside the hotel smoking a cigarette I had bummed off a guy at the door. When I had sucked the last out of it I pressed it out on the macadam and looked up at the hotel.
"Goodbye, Katrina." I said aloud to the building in general before driving off.
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ElenaSabout 8 years agoThe visuals were excellent as was the exposition of the narrator's thought processes. I enjoyed it overall but found it a bit frustrating also. The timing between thoughts and action seemed a bit off-balance. Just when I was getting into the sexual action and wanted more, the narrator had already moved on to another thought. That it bothered me that much points out what a compelling author you are. But I couldn't quite favorite this one just for that reason. 4/5 certainly isn't bad and I'll certainly read your next piece. Thanks for sharing it.
