All Comments on 'Katrina's Spell Pt. 01'

You need to edit more carefully, paying attention to sentence structure. There are many sentences that should either be split into two or have a semicolon substituted for a comma.

And to the previous comment, I'd add specifically you should CHECK THE ERRORS OF SPELLING. Not much else to say.

I appreciate your feedback. I will definitely be more careful with my editing in the future, and take more time with it. :)

Nutted instantly ;)