All Comments on 'Kat's Sex Diary: My Date with Simon'

Hot story with welcome originality to it.

Do not use 'even' in at least your next six stories, or in any of your writing. The word dilutes the strength of the word you want it to enhance.

Check out 'The Elements of Style'. Small, short book on writing. Keep writing, you're (even) pretty good at it. ;-)

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