All Comments on 'Kat's Sex Diary: The Massage Student'

I loved every word of it!

Beautiful story! Nude massage with full sex is best. More stories like this, please.

I recommend you proofread more closely. When the reader has to stop to figure-out what’s happening, the flow of the piece is interrupted.

Also, just a note: “Till” is what a farmer does to the soil with his tractor and plow. I believe the word you are looking for is ‘til, a contraction of until.

I found the piece blissful, relaxed tender and I rushed. Good storytelling.