by ericthebard
Not only was that female voice 100% believable, you managed to make Katy feel like a real person in less than a thousand words. Kudos to you, sir. I got such a sense that an actual human, with actual feelings and actual needs, not to mention a wonderfully rich backstory, was talking to me, that by the time she made her move on Neil I WANTED to read about this wonderful young lady getting fucked, and it was so, so good.
5 easy stars. Now I have to read the rest. I need to get ready for work but I have to read the rest!