All Comments on 'Katy Did'

by ericthebard

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Loved the punchline in the final sentence!

MayorReynoldsMayorReynoldsover 7 years ago
Beautiful.

Not only was that female voice 100% believable, you managed to make Katy feel like a real person in less than a thousand words. Kudos to you, sir. I got such a sense that an actual human, with actual feelings and actual needs, not to mention a wonderfully rich backstory, was talking to me, that by the time she made her move on Neil I WANTED to read about this wonderful young lady getting fucked, and it was so, so good.

5 easy stars. Now I have to read the rest. I need to get ready for work but I have to read the rest!

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Wow. Some twelve years between Monk and Nat and Kady. Anyway, I'm posting stories again while inspirations lasts. A lot's changed in the intervening years. I hope my stories entertain. EtB