All Comments on 'Kay Starts an Adventure Ch. 03'

I am enjoying the pace of this story, and have given it 5 stars. You will get knockers and trolls because of the subject matter, but please keep writing and I will keep reading. Well done so far,

Rotter

After this part, this marriage is doomed...In part 3, the writer repeated again part 2 and add some more...As soon as she and her lover had: "A picture of tenderness as he kissed her gently, she responded. Her lips pressed to his as they shared a long loving kiss, all thoughts of Dan gone...", this marriage was finished and doomed...1*

Since you ask, I would suggest nothing. The deed has been done. Any more would be mere detail. Unless, of course, you want to introduce real emotional tension by making Dan jealous instead of a willing cuck.

Congrats for this excellent story!!!!!!!!!

Continue it soon, please ;)

Stan will be a gentleman but he wants her more than the others, I would like to keep her for several more hours tonight. I think Dan will be ever the more inquisitive when she returns very early in the morning. Kay has already gone farther and stayed longer than she will know.

Wonderful story, my wife is home, no one else is calling.

After ch.1 I knew this story.

Keep writing, I'll keep giving ones.

I think the first two chapters could have been omitted. This part seems like a stand alone story with all of the build up self contained. Let's see about chapter four.

the best!

"Nothing else?"

"No, " i guess her twits being played with was worth lying to her husband over? smh