All Comments on 'Kayleen's Apartment Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Don't be a pussy

I'm sure your story was fine, but the opening paragraph was just pussified. If you don't want comments, don't post here. I did not read your story.

PennLadyPennLadyover 13 years ago
Well..

Decently written, but what was the point of him being married? I mean, I assume he was as it was never stated that his wife was deceased or anything. Perhaps it'll be important later but I couldn't figure why he needed to be married -- and cheating on his wife.

connielingusconnielingusover 13 years ago
I liked it

I seem to be in the minority but I liked the story. The sex was hot but believable and I like the prospect of more good times to come. (no pun intended)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Making him married ruins any of the "hotness" at least in my opinion.

chytownchytownover 1 year ago

****That was a hot one. Thanks for sharing.

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I've always had a vivid imagination and fantasizing about the women who have passed through my life goes back as long as I can remember. Upon discovering online erotica, I started to think that maybe I should go ahead and write down some of these fantasies and submit them to ...

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