by Irish Moss
I'm sure your story was fine, but the opening paragraph was just pussified. If you don't want comments, don't post here. I did not read your story.
Decently written, but what was the point of him being married? I mean, I assume he was as it was never stated that his wife was deceased or anything. Perhaps it'll be important later but I couldn't figure why he needed to be married -- and cheating on his wife.
I seem to be in the minority but I liked the story. The sex was hot but believable and I like the prospect of more good times to come. (no pun intended)