All Comments on 'Kayleigh Ch. 01'

You need to use an editor - There are several times when a word is missing or the wrong word is used. There are also a few times where you use a question mark at the end of a sentence that is not a question, such as:

"I thought they usually don't do research apart from their main jobs?"

Overall though, very enjoyable!

Ya gotta finish it!

You desperately need a proof reader. I enjoyed it for the most part. But I hated the ending when she just rudely and abusively kicked him out. She just said earlier that he had eaten her pussy better than anyone else but she treats him like dirt? For real? That dropped you from a close 4 to a solid 3/5.