All Comments on 'Kaylin's Recovery'

by ronia5lmf

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sirsemegasirsemegaabout 14 years ago
Nice!

Well done. I liked how he broke through her frustrations and got to the heart of the matter, that she hadn't truly given herself to him. Well played out scene!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Mmmmm

Very nice... definitely held my interest, then I was holding something else! :)

Untested_and_waitingUntested_and_waitingalmost 13 years ago
Good Job

I very much enjoyed reading your story. It was clever how you tied it in (to this site) in the end.

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