All Comments on 'Keep It in the Family Pt. 01'

Story was fine until you included the scat aspect. Totally ruined it!!

I wish you would have dived deeper into the scat part. Like maybe he rimmed her as it came out?

one can only hope that the daughters get involved with Mommy and the boys?

Really liked this story, especially the pee part. Love too how you set it up for subsequent chapters. 5*s

Why did you have bring the scat part into the story. Turned me right off reading any more

Oh im really enjoying most of this story. Can't wait to read the other parts.

Very hot so far, like all but the scat. Looking forward to the rest of the kids to join in.

It would be good for them to figure out a way to turn her friend Elizabeth into an incestuous slut fucking her own son and coming over to share sons or be double and triple penetrated in a mother-son gang bang.

The plot is great. The European English threw me off when I realized they were in America. I wish the story had been proofread first.

Looking forward to reading on.

Very good story! Thanks!

very nice. i am sure this happens in families more often then we realize

Great story, I loved it & can't wait to read about both of her sons fucking her.