by VeryDirtyMind
Oh well. Your name is very dirty mind so I shouldn't be surprised but I found myself loving this story. You described this Rainbow girl so well that I was picturing her in my mind by the end, sort of like a chunky Julianne Moore with hairy armpits. I love hairy girls as well and as for the sweaty part, while it isn't my cup of tea if I had that Rainbow in my bed I would have done just what the trucker did too
This was so hot I didn't make it to the end the first time. This trucker is as sick as me and the chick is raunchy too. Would love a sequel to this
very nice, keep writing, great development of story and characters and, oh yes, great sex!
Well written. Great development - I'm looking forward to the sequel - I hope you write one. If you can squeeze in a bit more peeing that would be good. Maybe give her a wetting fetish?
But I'm sure whatever you write will be great- keep it up.
I started reading this because I am writing a time travel novela and you have hippie chick as a story tag. That being said I do not usually get into "romance" stories but this one had just the exact right amount of shock factor, humor, and intelligence to keep me interested. I will deny this later ;-) but the ending had me all choked up and a big smile on my face. (Tell no one I can be a big softy, it will ruin my image lol)
It was not erotic for me because the whole hair thing is cringe worthy in my spank bank, but all in all it was a damn fine read. Thank you for this, I am going to go see if you have any other stories on your profile. I genuinely enjoyed your style. Xoxo Maliceon
What a great story line and sex to boot. Started reading this and immediately visualized the characters. You really are a great writer..you got a great gift.
That was an excellent story.I could see her and him in my mind,and love how kinky both are,was hoping they stayed together.You have a gift for the written word.
You really know how to build up anticipation, especially with Rainbeaux helping Red pee in the truck.
Lovely tale, well written, lots of authentic anticipation with close-up sights and sounds and smells. Saying this not just because I love unshaven bodies, just well written prose. Bravo.
Dear Author, Loved the two characters and the story line. You wrote this well and brought back memories of Woodstock and those long ago days. Thanks