All Comments on 'Keeper of Tartarus'
by ardentdreamer
- 8 Comments
Anonymousalmost 9 years agowonderfully done, though it lacks sex.
Tw0Cr0wsalmost 9 years agoDoge is either:
an elected, chief-of-state lordship, the ruler of the republic in many of the Italian city-states during the medieval and renaissance periods, in the Italian "crowned republics".
Or:
A nickname for a dog of the Shiba Inu breed, which has become an internet meme.
If you are referring to a fighting move that would be dodge D O D G E
Also, you are another misuser of U for you.
This is not text messaging, there is not a character limit.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoIts an adult story site mate, people come here to read about cocks being sucked. The only thing sucked is your half assed attempt into a shitty story. A complete waste of time and like the comment below you had like numerous flaws. It look me more time figuring out what you wrote than reading this shitty substitute of a story. Do everyone a favour, stop writing any more shit.You are not cut out for it.
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoJust keep writing you are good enough to write but if you get an editor and include some sex it will be the best story on the site
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