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by MTL17

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Needs editing

Good plot, great characterization, but it needs heavy editing. The formatting's off, there are spelling errors, and Britishisms like using "mum" instead of "mom" for "mother" don't fit the California setting. Really looking forward to more, but fix the distracting errors, please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Keep it up

Love this series, just love it.

DarkTalonDarkTalonover 15 years ago
want to see More

Cant wait to see the next bit

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