All Comments on 'Keeping Her 4.0'

by fuzzydino

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
promise

You have promise, this is a great opening story! build the sex a little slower, add some more details, i look forward to reading more from you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
off or of

off yes- of yes- but never off of.

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