All Comments on 'Keeping It in the Family'

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peebudypeebudyover 12 years ago
all in the family

great story, well written with lots of detail in the backstory as well as great sex action. I wish I had a sister in law like that!e backstory as well as great sex action. I wish I had a sister in law like that!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Interesting story

sounds like he married the wrong sister. things like this can happen with jealous sisters

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
now if only my sister in law......

Hot story. Whilst I love my wife she is a little reserved. But her younger sister.............

CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaover 12 years ago
A secret fever of submissive infidelity

Lynn is a very impressive character. This touches on a lot of your established themes, but has a note of secret intimacy, a potent mix of guilt, desire, affection, and jealousy, that adds a hushed tone of expectation to the decadent sex play and unbounded lustfulness. Exceptionally good!

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggabout 12 years ago
Good Story or Fantasy !

This ' submission ' more so then any story I've read needs a sequel. Those two ARE going to get busted . The only question is WHEN & how. Anything's possible. The mind boggles at the possibilities.

socalchris951socalchris951over 3 years ago

Hot read! Thanks for writing.

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