All Comments on 'Keeping It in the Family'

Masterfully crafted story written bi a professional, thanks for sharing.

Alwaystaboo

A 2nd chapter is definitely needed. Please do a little more editing. There were a couple of places that stopped the flow of the story.

your stories! This one so far is the best. Hopefully there is more to come!

It's quite short, but you managed to put a lot of heat into it.

I'd like a bit more reluctance on both Charlotte's actions and Gwen's enjoyment, to make it more realistic. It is why we're here, of course, but it's not every day that a daughter gets to make love to her mother's pussy until she orgasms into her mouth.

A wonderful but short read! I would love to see the relationship develop between them all.

Affectionately yours, as always

Corinne xxxx

Five stars.

You left them spooning in a BDSM playroom, suggesting that once they catch their breath, collect their wits, any number of things could happen, anything from love to war. Another chapter, Miss C. Please.

I wish it was longer

I've never been into pain or a lot of ass play, but all I can say is wow! Your story vividly and sensuously showed how fun it can be to push one's limits. Now I have to run and change my panties.... ~M

Hallo Mistress Christine!

Well you've done it again, another brilliant, well written, sexy story!.... I'm reading the last story I have of yours, and hoping that you will beat me, that is I'm hoping you will post a new story, before I get to the end of this one..

I wish it could be more, oh well.... So 5-Stars and 5-Lovely Orgasms!.... With my thank-you Mistress, for sharing another lovely orgasm with me! 😍

Your very kinky dyke friend,

Gay Kat.

xx

It's always nice to be reduced to an old friend. I still love the discovery scene and the sublime excitement of being discovered. So sexy.