All Comments on 'Keeping My Promise'

I reread the first part of this and I loved how you meshed the two together. I think there may be a third part? If not it's a great and lovely story of two people from different worlds in a deep love. 5 stars

Loved it as I do all your stories.

As with all ur work, enjoyed it so much. Like biphilmass said hope there might be a third part to this story to round it out, although it's denouement does well standing alone as is. Kudos! Another 5 *'s

Yet another well-written, thoroughly engaging story. A romantic story devoid of the gratuitous sex others seem to think necessary. Please keep posting more.

this is the kind of story that those that read your work expect

thanks gator for finishing this story with a great ending

This gives more meaning to the other story you wrote. Now, you can read the first part and go on to the next without feeling that there's something missing.

Thank you.

Few words (FANTASTIC. BEAUTIFUL. ENTHRALLING) THANK YOU YOU MADE A FAN OF YOURS HAPPY! ! Love you all! Bye.

On a "literary" site that is intended for fiction of dreamland and fantasy this offering is not even vaguely realistic. It is so far out that is wasn't really enjoyable. It had good intentions so I rated it 3*, but it wasn't worth spending any more time on than this. Put some realism and some teeth in your future offerings and make people who like a good story (like me) hang on your plot twists and make the people in your fantasyland come to life (in the real world).

thanks

A very good gap fill. Thanks. Now on to the finish!

I loved it. Another home run from my favorite author.

the best story ive read in ten years

Beautiful story!

Named gator you sure are an excellent writer. 5

The author can write a story, but unfortunately it is always a variant on the same theme. Also he always keeps inserting inane Republican Party propaganda in his storylines and keeps inserting derogating comments clearly what is meant to be jabs at the Obama administration. As if the Bush II and Trump administrations were without fault. Those pseudo-political comments are completely unnesesary and detracting from the story.

nice story, not over run by sex scenes could use a little more drama and action.

Mushy, mushy, mushy, good story though. Not to much sex also, some authors get carried away. There are ccouple of other really good romance stories, Save One Love and Finding Uncle Billy, Charity Begins Next Door and The Promise are also great.

What a wonderful love story, well written and a enjoyable read. Gets my 5++star vote

I have been enjoying the series so far. My only critique would be the recapping of the kidnapping and his being shot etc. I felt it unnecessary unless this was intended as a srand alone piece.

Great story!

5

Good story, but a large section in the beginning was a repeat of part 1.

They say love is blind Rick has made the biggest mistake I think of his life marrying her