All Comments on 'Keeping up with the Joneses Ch. 01'

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jsmangisjsmangisover 7 years ago
My Kind of Perversion

Great story, I hope there are more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Might as well bang the rest of his sisters his mother and mia while the husbands are away and everyone is back from college for summer. Looking long term a bunch of oops if the husbands arent shooting live rounds.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Continue!

Really great story! More chapters! Have the other sisters and mom join in!

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 7 years ago
Great Start!

I hope it evolves into a free-for-all. Do we find out that Izzy is already fucking Dad???

tankrabbittankrabbitover 7 years ago
Great story

Good pace, keep it going.

homerjayhomerjayabout 7 years ago
nice one.

hope to read more, thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Amazing!!!

Hope to read the next chapters... Let there be a huge orgy at their swimming pool with the sisters, mom and the neighbours.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Fantastic

Would like to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please add more

This is my favourite story so far

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Awesome, Fantastic

Great story

Love the Brother / Sister story.

With Dad gone, Alex may need to service Mom.

Will she take him to Dream land

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
A mix of raunch

and sleeze

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
INCREDIBLE

Had 2 read again

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyabout 6 years ago
Huh?

Got tired of waiting for the debauchery, then when it was just boob groping figured not worth reading any more. Besides you started off referring to the future which is normally a stopper for me. He had just shorts on while watching the unlikely big boobed asian mum. Somewhere along the line he put on jeans for when watching porn. Not sure who or why someone's sisters laughed at his mum for being brown, got me confused as they were visiting someone, but at home also. Some asians have very brown skin, so got me more confused.

Guess this comment will be deleted, but thought it worthwhile for you to learn something.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great Story

This whole series (5 parts) is fantastic. I really hope that you are able to continue the story. It would be great to meet the older sister and have some parts that involve the father. There are too many options to leave it hanging at 5 chapters!

goducks1goducks1almost 6 years ago
5 stars

loved the tease, then great sex. wow.

MajorRewriteMajorRewritealmost 5 years ago
Hot fucking stupid fun

5 stars

laughdruidlaughdruidover 2 years ago

I loved this story so far, more chapters please.

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