by DarkBlush
Gah damn... Apparently this stopped over 8 years ago 😭. I don't think there will be a continuation y'all
Please, Please finish the story. Love these two and want to read more about them.
Wow you really are astounding as a creator.
I was very very fortunate to stumble into your book. I've been in this site for maybe six years or seven years usually just for the smut but your storyline is very beautifully done thank you so much for sharing this with us. I'm wishing you the best
Why do you do this? Great story and you just leave it like this....? What the heck!!!! Please finish!!!
This story is amazing! I love your writing, please continue. I would read another 10 chapters.
I keep coming back hoping that you have continued this story. Please don't leave me hanging...... Looking forward to seeing them playing by Dylan's rules. And how does junior turn out. Will he be "normal" or like Dylan? Anxiously waiting............
Please come back and finish it. This is my second time reading 📖 it again I love ❤️ it so.
How about a new chapter to bring in the new year...2017? :)
I know life happens and updates get hard to do but i want to know what happens please contiue
Please finish this story! I just LOVE Prissy and Dylan.
Don't leave people with cliffhangers as high as this and then, stop. It is wrong
This series has been just amazing! When your readers start hating fictional characters (Dylans dad) and loving the main characters, you have created a wonderful story and I cannot WAIT to see what these characters get up to next :) Please continue with all your stories, you have many fans and supporters - Bear
Unfortunately there aren't many good bwwm stories being uploaded to this site anymore. You truly did spoil us I guess with your wonderful writing and unique characters. Does anyone know of any sites with good bwwm stories? '
나는 당신의 이야기를 사랑해요. I hope this is not the end. This story was seriously amazing not your usual get nasty and that's all to it, but it had an actual plot that was executed wonderfully. I wish that you will continue writing this story.
I'm praying and hoping that you don't leave this story unfinished and that you don't leave us hanging. I hope you don't leave us hanging for the other two stories also. Please update as soon as possible, or at least update us on why you haven't posted any new chapters. I love your stories and I know you have a life outside of literotica. I hope that I don't come off as selfish and unappreciative, because I truly do appreciate the time and effort you put into these stories. For free no less.
Thank you, and update soon.
Have a blessed day.
I am loving Dylan also, he know he love him some Pristine. I also love how he treats his mother. Mother Evans needs to check herself and so does up tight Pastor Evans if you even want to call him that.
Thank you for sharing please continue.
You came back with all 3 stories and then left again, please update soon, I check everyday and still nothing.
Pristine's parents have some serious issues.
Dylan needs to go back over there and let them know he is not going to put up with their craziness disrespecting him or Pristne.
I believe their visit has been long enough. Get away from there and if they want to see their grand they will have to come on Dylan's and Pristine's turf.
Please update soon. I can't wait to see what Dylan is going to do. 👊
Can we get an update soon?
I hope Dylan set them straight. To degrade your daughter in front of her husband is crazy. I don't know how long their visit was suppose to be, but I think I would be leaving so I can be with my husband.
Please update real soon.
Please continue this series .I desperately want too know what happened next.
Time for a game change he's been nice has bit his tongue and let them treat his wife like trash. Now it's time for him to show them who he is and this isn't gonna happen again her sobbing in his arms after they've put her through the ringer.
Dylan needs to set the family straight and let them know they will not talk to his wife any kind of way. Regardless of their opinions or what they thought, his wife was everything he wants and needs.
What Pristine is calling protection is "control." Her mother is not trying to protect Pristine but control every facet of Pristine's life to be what she wants it to be. Her mother's remarks have downgraded her daughter during the entire visit. She has said nothing positive about Dylan or her. They have no idea that their daughter is beyond being happy with Dylan. Dylan's mother treats Pristine like a daughter.
Please update soon.
I was so mad at Prissy parents. I went ahead and look up squashing. Totally shock and sadden that her mother is such a bitch. Dylan love Prissy so much. Waiting for the monster to come out the closet. Well done DarkBlush.
I hate when parents can not treat their grown children with respect, then have the nerve to be offended when they finally speak up for themselves, or when their spouse's speak up and call them out!
Thank you Dylan for having Prissy's back. The family is in for a rude awakening, I can't wait!
5 stars!!
You are an awesome author!!! I check this site everyday for your stories. Loving where you are taking them. I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Make them longer lol
DarkBlush, how I've missed your words! This is my favorite of your stories, and Dylan did NOT disappoint. The pile of macaroons was a nice touch by him. His idiosyncrasies make my heart sing. Thank you for continuing to update and I wait with bated breath for Dylan's POV of day 2!
This will be good, why did she go back and visit her donors? They are awful people ad damn at least she goes to church. After this Prissy won't have to worry about her parents anymore. Cool beans!!
I know some people will put up with family just because they are related. Prissy is still looking for her parent's approval is why she puts up with their abuse.
I really hope Dylan will tell them off and of course they will play the victim role. Her parents don't want to change. Prissy need to stop trying and let them come to her if they come to their senses.
Get em Dylan! How rude, nice outfits and fine china and still low class! Can't wait for the next chapter. Famous words I'm just looking out for you. Yeh right SMH
You left us hanging Hun! Oh well I can't wait for more.
Her parents better be glad Dylan didn't chop their little asses and put them in suitcases.
Prissy's parent definitely tried it... LOL!! I am seriously hoping Mr. Dylan gets them both in check and tolerable, real quick. I can't believe they would bad mouth, not only her husband but their own daughter while carrying precious life, for the first time. Who does that? And calls themselves family? SMH.
Please, please post another chapter soon. Great job :)