All Comments on 'Keetra's First Tree'

This was a horribly written piece of crap. I don't even know where to start with the criticism. U would suggest you read stories rather than writing them

Don't write anymore, you're not good at it.

Your male character should be in prison for the rest of his life. Or your mind should be. Total garbage.

this is absolutely the worst piece of trasn that has ever been on this site.go back to grammer school.

One star, First time? I don't think so, More of a Rape story then Incest at the end.

No more here or anywhere else...

If you're going to comment saying they have bad grammar then you have to be able to spell your own stuff out and it isn't a bad story for their first time at least I think it's their first since they only have one story. Overall it's not bad.

This is disgusting. No.

this is more of a rape story than a pleasurable first time.

This is a perfect example of why this site needs to have a 0 Star - black star.

You need to learn how to tell a story, this is just as boring as your other story, its like reading a text book. And when you're going to have rape or incest in your story WARN us before hand so we don't have to give you one fucking star at the end of reading something we wouldn't if you'd warned us of the themes. You really do need to work on your grammar and punctuation.

Hey assholes, this category is non consent so you were browsing for rape stories or something of that caliber. Don't you rag on the damn author for your fucktard lack of common sense.

...dumb shit is this? Are you 12? Have you had sex before? Seen a woman naked? Had a science class with even a cursory mention of basic physics?

Seriously, what is this shit?

So much wrong- don’t go ass to pussy EVER and don’t label things as non con and throw inscest in the mix horrid story.