All Comments on 'Kellie and Brad Ch. 05'

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Mostera1 over 11 years ago

Superb

You really outdid yourself with this chapter! I could almost feel myself in the arena when Kellie made that shot. The lovemaking scenes were well done and very erotic to read. :). I enjoyed the gang flirting with Brad, and his heartfelt confession to Kellie. This is excellent writing!!!

Thank you!

hillsofark over 11 years ago

excellent

Emotions , romance, story and love. Nicely done

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