All Comments on 'Kellie and Brad'

A very mentally challenging winter sport. I am very impressed how you wove this relatively unknown game into a very poignant love story! Well played! Well played.

Thank you! 5*****

M1

PS: Glad to see Kelly got 'shot rock' at the end.

A little fast-paced for my liking and I can see that, in its own way, the story stands up on its own, but this is only the beginning for the two protagonists. What else is to come? I think there's still mileage in this one...

with curling for love and a trophy family. TK U MLJ LV NV

To those that read, voted and commented on this story. I am submitting Chapter 2 in this story tonight and it will, I hope, be posted soon.

Well Written... great flow.. my first reading in 'Romantic ' section in literotica.com

Very sweet and touching. If one could follow the inner workings a bit more consistently it would be truely great.