All Comments on 'Kelli's Descent Ch. 03'

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jleetechiejleetechieover 9 years ago
Gorean theme

Really liking the story, sensing the Gorean theme even more strongly. Glad the authors are sending in their chapters quickly. Keep it up!

socalgyrl08socalgyrl08over 9 years ago
Zizzling

turning up the heat, eh? i feel it!! more!!

steph2004stersteph2004sterover 9 years ago
Exactly what i need

...on a cold winter day. Saving heating bill by reading your story.

aznlookinguyaznlookinguyover 9 years ago
nothing original but

I don't see anything very original here, but the wording and excellent writing style make it more than worthwhile.

melsdadmelsdadover 9 years ago
I'm hooked and wanting to read more

Loving this story, it's pace is most arousing.

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I should have been born under the three moons of Gor. Since I was not, I have to make the best of it with my fantasies in story form.

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