All Comments on 'Kelly and I's Very Wet Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
What kind of title is that?

How about "Kelly's and My Very Wet Time"? Work on your story grammar, as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Grammar

Grammar in the title turned me off. I didn't read any farther!

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