All Comments on 'Kelly Makes a New Friend'

One of the sweetest short stories I have read on this site. Good believable characters, situations and settings. (How I miss London-and Tanglefoot!) Well written too with natural and believable dialogue.

And as a bi girl, it's a breath of fresh air to read a story where the straight girl gets the sweet guy rather than being drugged, brainwashed, raped, seduced and otherwise corrupted by misanthropes.

(Climbs off soapbox)

Bravo!

Really enjoyed the story, I hope you will write more about Kelly and Stevie, can't wait for it

Sometimes We Just Have To Accept The Fact That

Our Friends & Family Do Care & Have Our Best On

Their Minds & In Their Hearts.

It's Really Nice When Things Work Out So

Wonderfully.

I Love This Story Too !

Kisses

And kudos to you for not having the straight girl suddenly becoming totally lesbian!

Great job, well written, nice twists, fabulous ending, more please!

Swoon... I especially loved the chemistry of the characters, as individuals and of course together. Nicely done. Kelly and Stevie's verbal quips were smack on. Thank you!

Hey,

Thanks for sharing. Very good read. It's great to see the straight couple set-up the gay couple. You did a bang-up job. Thanks again

Sometimes others know us better than we think. Thank God! Great story, loved the way it finished up, oh such sweet memories.

I loved it...the story was cute yet sexy and I love how realistic the characters are.

Funny interacting story! Thank You

Thanks for writing this short story. As you can see from the title, I loved it. Well done!

Kisses

And I agree with those who praised you for not taking the obvious tack of the straight girl turning gay.

Not to be redundant, but I must add my voice to those who applaud your not taking the obvious route of "straight girl turns gay."

Please, more about these characters!

that was a good short story and so cute

This story was ripe with friendship, lust, angst, and finally love. Thanks for sharing it with us!

A great little fun story---five stars worth---and it was good to see the main characters enjoying a decent pint of real ale.

two staars from me, it was hard for me to follow, and not erotic for me.

What a ....... .? What a short story? :) ........ This is so perfect so well written so wonderful BUT SO DAMN SHORT ....... My this content is good for 100 pages ...... :( ....... But damn lovely

Fun, fun, fun!

And there's no t-bird for daddy to take away!

Nice!