All Comments on 'Kelly’s First Inspection'

I think you should add a reference to deciding a safeword and also at least a reference to a discussion about limits.

It comes across as stilted and overly formal to me, using clinical labels during sex just doesn’t inspire erotic thoughts. He won’t allow colloquial terms allowed but then immediately after he uses the word “horny”, will they “fuck” or “copulate”?

The overall concept itself; of two long term friends entering into a D/s relationship is erotic and obviously not without challenges.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)