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Click hereUp stairs in the study Craig slipped his cock back into his pants and began saving and labelling the video footage that he'd recorded while watching Kelly and his father. Fuck, he'd got some pretty hot stuff there; he couldn't wait to start editing it. There should be a good return on this one and It made the extra camera's in the kitchen worth it. Just then the door opened and Kelly slipped in.
"He's gone, how did it look?"
"Great, fucking out of this world, you were incredible honey" replied Craig.
"Hmmmm let me see some" asked Kelly as she settled into Craig's lap.
Craig click on to a file, and once the picture appeared, scrolled forward.
On the screen Kelly was bent over, her hips swaying. Then Steve appeared in Camera.
Craig's hand moved inside Kelly's leg, she parted them slightly, and he began to stroke her still wet and sticky cunt.
THE END
Thank you, Steve and Kelly, for sharing your fantasies with me and allowing me to use them as the basis for this story. However It must be stated that this is a work of fiction and not an account of a real event. There will be at least another two Kelly and Steve stories to come, both with a voyeuristic and exhibitionist theme.
I am always interested to hear feedback and suggestion from my readers, and will consider story ideas. However this is at my discretion, so please don't take it personally if I say no. I particularly love chatting to women, about my work, their thought and feelings, and this enables me, to write better.
Before contacting me, there several things to consider, I will not write about child abuse, excessive violence to woman, disfiguration, scat, etc, impregnation. This is my choice, these themes do not appeal to me and it is NOT an invitation to debate or argue over them. If you looking for Child Abuse stories, then perhaps you should consider seeking advise from a professional.
Generally my younger characters that are teenagers are 18, perhaps 16 (legal age of consent in the UK) if the background context to the story makes it necessary.
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The rules above are Nothing personal, but are for my own safety and I hope you will respect them and me.
As another person has suggested, use an editor! Better still, get yourself a basic grammar and language text book and read the damn thing. There is a lot of potential in the story, but I went cross-eyed, as opposed to cross-legged, while reading it. There is the 'lit' part of Literotica which some readers expect to mean 'literate'! Sadly, blueeyeandy, this does not describe you.
I didnt even bother finishing it. There were so many incorrect spelling, you couldnt stick to the point, was just terrible to follow.
They have editors on here that could help you before you submit your story. If u dont use them few people will bother.
since you will be continuing this series.....add some family "bi" with craig and steve both tag teaming kelly..and kelly getting craig to live out his "bi" urges with his stud dad.. steve....and vice versa..and perhaps including craig/kelly's college stud son...to also tag team kelly...with kelly directing and participating...in all the bi action...
since you will be continuing this series.....add some family "bi" with craig and steve both tag teaming kelly..and kelly getting craig to live out his "bi" urges with his stud dad.. steve....and vice versa..and perhaps including craig/kelly's college stud son...to also tag team kelly...with kelly directing and participating...in all the bi action...