by dbconor
It was a very erotic situation and would like to see where you go with this story.
No longer, obviously. Has he considered the Carol might have engineered this situation and only pretended to pass out, so that she can put her own massaging skills to use on Mark?
One suggestion: make the marriage an open one and it would have been more believable. Most men wouldn't have done this so freely with the wife sleeping on the couch. Showering and then screwing on marital bed....ground for divorce, for sure. Open marriages are more common than most believe. Otherwise, it was a good read. Thanks!
It looked like the wife (Carol) set up this affair and is now going out of town more often and so is Mark. Maybe she did this so she could screw around with Mark and not feel guilty
Great job with this story. And good points others made. It's time now to do some followup stories.
Take the lead of one other reviewer's comment and have the next story be the evolution of Carol & Jim's relationship into an open one and go into an episode with Carol & Mark (or vice versa within that story).
Then it's open season for new massage stories for Jim with other women. And consider a "prequel" story of Jim massaging Carol.
his wife fell asleep. Suddenly all the rules they had lived by, the years of being faithful, just slipped away. If, as some have suggested it was his wife who engineered the situation, she should have stayed there with them. But, to do it behind the backs of their spouses, was wrong.
Would have preferred a bit more pre-that-night flirting to set things up. Oh, and 3 inches thick?? Really?? Read some real stats, then do the bit bigger thing, but huge is just a reminder that it's your fantasy & takes it out of credibility.
I really enjoyed the wife nearby. I'm really glad wife didn't join. That totally takes the erotic out of a cheating story. I love authors who write about blatant cheating and don't try to moralize the story by throwing in a participating wife.
Really appreciated the multiple sessions in one night and the continued affair. Both illustrate the overwhelming lust which is what makes IMO a cheating story so hot.
I thought I was going to get oil on me as I felt I was smelling her heat. Hottest story I've ever read!
Yea you dumbass your old lady had Kelly come over to give you some pussy because she was feeling guilty about fucking mark when they go out of town.