All Comments on 'Kelly's Private Party Invitation'

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Rapier875Rapier87513 days ago

Seriously?

You named the two lead characters Kelly and Kari ?

All the thousands of girls names there are and you picked two almost identical names beginning with the same initial ?

Why !

For heavens sake give the readers a fighting chance to identify people by using completely different names !

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