All Comments on 'Kelly's Summer Fun'

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VictorN55VictorN55almost 8 years ago
Damn!

High five! You have to continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
love the story

loved the story, do hope there will be more to come. do want to hear what happens when all six get together for fun. hope a lot more is involved between the girls.--please continue --thanks

itsnormyitsnormyalmost 8 years ago
Upstream or Down.

Strange as it seems, the ONLY to things that bothered me, if it is down stream from aunt and uncles, it has to be up stream to get to them....and make up your mind, are they swimming in a lake or a river....I don't mean to complain, but hitting those speed bumps ruins the smoothness of a great fucking story....need MORE !

Welshguy1952Welshguy1952almost 8 years ago
Fab story

Oh my god! That got me so horny, I must have more

carmel12carmel12almost 8 years ago
good start

Looking forward to more farm life

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Great story!!!

More Please!

MissUnbehavedMissUnbehavedalmost 8 years ago

Wow! Excellent story - really hope there's more chapters coming. And preferably soon. Please...

theincestclubtheincestclubalmost 8 years ago
Nice

Really good story, but you rushed over the sex scenes way too quickly.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More chapters please! !!!!

More chapters please!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Soo good.

We have read this story 5-6 times now and it still is not getting old. The only thing you have us wondering about is what is in the letter from her parents? She left it on the bed unopened and we have some ideas of what it could say but we want to be surprised when and if there is more chapters.

UllamineUllaminealmost 8 years ago
Chatting and reading

This was my second read of this story. Thank you so much for your continued writing. I'll be certain to acquaint myself further. Be well!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
An amazingly delightful theme.

This theme was excellent. New, creative, intriguing, delicious.

Please write more. The uninhibited sex is so real and friendly that it gives me goose bumps.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderful

I am incredibly wet and very turned on, I truly wonder how you can write from a young woman's prospective. I truly love this story and am now reading part II will there be a part III? PS now they all don't smoke? Lol B>3

nympholovernympholoverabout 7 years ago
More Please!!

This one and the next chapter are my two of favorite stories ever! Please more!!

bimale63bimale63almost 7 years ago
Great

Great story one of the best I have read can't wait to read more adventures

jonyoungaujonyoungaualmost 7 years ago
Location location location

I like where its set with the river and boat trips and that shes not a skinny chick but has curves. Good so far

jonyoungaujonyoungaualmost 7 years ago

Great again though shame there was not alot of anal or dping between the girls as youd think, still good work though.

OkieChuckOkieChuckalmost 7 years ago
more please

great interaction with all 6 peopld

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good!

Bill S.

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