by sds195
loved the story, do hope there will be more to come. do want to hear what happens when all six get together for fun. hope a lot more is involved between the girls.--please continue --thanks
Strange as it seems, the ONLY to things that bothered me, if it is down stream from aunt and uncles, it has to be up stream to get to them....and make up your mind, are they swimming in a lake or a river....I don't mean to complain, but hitting those speed bumps ruins the smoothness of a great fucking story....need MORE !
Wow! Excellent story - really hope there's more chapters coming. And preferably soon. Please...
Really good story, but you rushed over the sex scenes way too quickly.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
We have read this story 5-6 times now and it still is not getting old. The only thing you have us wondering about is what is in the letter from her parents? She left it on the bed unopened and we have some ideas of what it could say but we want to be surprised when and if there is more chapters.
This was my second read of this story. Thank you so much for your continued writing. I'll be certain to acquaint myself further. Be well!
This theme was excellent. New, creative, intriguing, delicious.
Please write more. The uninhibited sex is so real and friendly that it gives me goose bumps.
I am incredibly wet and very turned on, I truly wonder how you can write from a young woman's prospective. I truly love this story and am now reading part II will there be a part III? PS now they all don't smoke? Lol B>3
This one and the next chapter are my two of favorite stories ever! Please more!!
Great story one of the best I have read can't wait to read more adventures
I like where its set with the river and boat trips and that shes not a skinny chick but has curves. Good so far
Great again though shame there was not alot of anal or dping between the girls as youd think, still good work though.