All Comments on 'Kelly's Ultimate Challenge'

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hellzmysthellzmystover 16 years ago
Left Wanting More

I hope you will be adding more to your list soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Not as Good As Expected

In another one of your stories, you mention that you used to be a librarian with a Master's Degree. I would like to see some of that knowledge imparted into your stories, i.e. better sentence structure, improved vocabulary, and less vulgarity, more eloquence. With such an education, you must surely be capable of it. Your stories sound like the screen play for a pornographic movie, instead of literature. If that was your intent, then disregard my comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Heyy

Heyyyy i would love weekly stories

My email is allyssamarie23@icloud.com

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