All Comments on 'Kenny: Take My Wife, Please'

I thought the way he took his friends wife and showed him how to make love to her was excellent. It isn't your run of the mill husband watching the wife getting her brains fucked out like most of these type of stories are.Kenny showed respect to her husband and to her the way he went about the sexual connection he had with her.A true loving sexual tryst for all three of them. Thanks for the great story..........Rich

W.T.F?

it says in your bio you have no fetishes, so you write this story, knowing your not that bright it would be a waste of time insulting you you wouldn't understand anyway.

The plot had a lot of potential, but you blew it (no pun intended) in the ending. There was another way to do it that would have been far more poignant.

You need to brush up on your technique. There is a lot of head-hopping. there shouldn't be any. The Boston thing didn't add a thing to the story. And...by the way, who is Vicki and where does she fit into the story?

You probably had "Vicki" in the plot and then changed you mind. Proofing before publishing would have avoided that.