by Kerina_Smith
It's just a bad story. You have too many plot holes. Kerina is just too stupid to have made it into college. Come on, both times she "passed out" was after talking to and recieving water from Jack. You don't think she'd it together? There's other problems, but this is the biggest by far.
dude this story sucks because it is far too short; plus it lacks interesting details or development. try writing longer segments and including more description of everything.
Delicious humiliation of a sweet embarassed teenager. The images your word story creates catch the right mood. Please continue these humiliation explorations.