All Comments on 'Kerina's College Humiliation Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Loving this story

I can't wait to read more of this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Sorry.

It's just a bad story. You have too many plot holes. Kerina is just too stupid to have made it into college. Come on, both times she "passed out" was after talking to and recieving water from Jack. You don't think she'd it together? There's other problems, but this is the biggest by far.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
needs to be longer; needs more detail

dude this story sucks because it is far too short; plus it lacks interesting details or development. try writing longer segments and including more description of everything.

arthur29arthur29over 15 years ago
Delicious humiliation of a sweet embarassed teenag

Delicious humiliation of a sweet embarassed teenager. The images your word story creates catch the right mood. Please continue these humiliation explorations.

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