All Comments on 'Keyholder's First Week'

Best story on here in a very long time, anazing

Very nice story.....its been a long time since there's been a character like Beth who really got my imagination going, let alone your character, Jason's.....hot, hot, hot!

Blown away love it I would love my wife to be someone like Beth...

Fantastic story!!! One of the best ever, thanks for sharing here!

Very hot. 5th degree burns kind of hot...

The hottest story I have read here in a long time. Made me hard and leaky inside my cage.

Great use of modern technology, texting, video, phone paired vibrator, etc. Made it feel very realistic and come alive. Well done.

Man, i'd like to try most of the things except the public stuff, it's too much for me. besides that i loved the read, smoking hot story, congrats to the writer;

People have to pee. These devices are unsanitary, moronic, not sexual in any way. And not consensual.

This story is so hot , I rubbed and fingered my pussy while dreaming of doing this to a slut of mine

Loved it all, great job! The outside stuff was hot!

This woman does not deserve him. Power trip my ass!!!

It was too long for me, and to be honest I stopped reading after page 3. It amazed me how he was able to unlock handcuffs behind his back. But the "Hush" butt plug part was hilarious.

You are a gifted writer! Thank you for sharing your story!

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Very hot. Yes it's long but well worth the read. A talented author.

I wouldn't mind reading what the next week was like.

I like the fairly natural dialog, the characters have a relationship, and the situations aren't so far off the believability scale. Nice "how it all began" story.

And ignore the guys who are complaining. Really makes you wonder why they're here all the time.

This was great - I got to the end and just wished there was more!

Did not want it to end

Interaction between the two of them and the tease and denial is spot-on

Week 2 please

This is one of the hottest femdom stories ever. All through it I wished that I was in his place. I'd love to have my wife lock me up and me serve and satisfy her sexual desires while I.m deprived of mine.. She isn't into that kind of sex. I'd gladly submit to her.

Starts out fun. So many of these stories evolve into normal men and women becoming power driven women and men begging for their penis to be deprived and locked in cages for weeks and months at a time.

Incredible story, I loved it and didn’t want it to end!!!

Sadistic, cruel, evil, torture. For gods sake man, get yourself sorted and choke her out then tie her to the tree with the gag in & leave her there for a couple of days. If she’s still alive when you get back, fine, if not, well hey, life’s a bitch (& so is she).

Great story. Could you please organize your stories into a Series? It would help to see all related stories and the order to read them in.

I loved the story. He is so lucky to find a woman like you. Only a small part of it . That I got to live out. With my wife . She became. She had me to write down what I would like to live out. There was whipping, nipples clips. Wights on nipples/balls. As well as cockolding. And the love of a key holder. And she did them . I love her with all my heart. Thank you for the wonderful story. #5 would be a 10

Why do men allow this sort of nonsense ?

She is a sadistic, misandrist bitch and he is a pathetic little wimp.

Nice story I think. You kinda lost us at the icy hot!