All Comments on 'Kicked Out with My Daughter Ch. 01'

Like how daughter is in control

"....dogged my cellphone that my wife had just thrown in my direction."

Dogged?

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Good build up can't wait for the next chapter and the humiliation of mom. Keep going had me hard from the moment daughter revealed she was commando underneath her skirt, looking forward to the next chapter daughter pregnant with daddy's baby

Please explain to me how a 50 percent chance at a birth defect or developmental issues is sexy! The story was great until the talk about using a child for revenge against someone, because all of a sudden it went from sexy to not sexy full stop.

I have read about dogging, but didn't know cellphones could be involved. Did you play dogg ball in school? We used to play dodge ball, but your school maybe played a different game.

Good until the revenge baby bs. I know its not real but its not fair to have a baby just to be spiteful. I enjoyed it until that very monent. And she's 18 so what does she mean "she can't be on her own with a daughter who just gave birth." Lol its not her baby bitch she'll just kick you out.

I love daddy/daughter stories and this didn't disappoint.I also loved that he impregnated her.

The daughter needs to be barefoot, naked, & pregnant from now on. She needs to have at least 26 babies by father. Giving birth to a new one every 10 months.

I happen to like reading stories where the father impregnants his daughter. Hope there will another chapter

Made my cock throb at the thought of making my daughter pregnant, of course, I'd need a daughter first. Lol

Great story

Am I the only one who has heard of "morning after" pill?

I get your point but not every place in the world has that as something anyone can get, also it would kinda take away from the whole impregnation risk fetish thing

I love it.

You use plurals where the context requires possessives. For example, you write "daddies" where you should have written "daddy's."

As with so many other idiots who post unedited bull crap, you need beta readers and/or an editor to correct these mistakes before you post.

Interesting..started out tempting Daddy.

Why not kick Mpmmy out since she was the

Next chapter soon, can't wait

This is a painful read with all the baby talk by an 18 yo who wears racy clothes and fucks herself silly with dildos.

Give this one a pass.

k'niving lil bitch.

I like the start, but the "I tried to pull out but instead went in deeper" Is too far fetched.

Also, if she was a virgin why did she need birth control.

The wife was skinny with big tits but that body type didn't attract him? Why did he marry her then? What a stupid plot device to explain the lack of desire for the wife.

Couldn’t get past the baby talk. Not in the least bit sexy. Cringe yes. Sexy, no.

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Great story except for the baby talk. No 18 year old talks like that unless she has some weird mental health issue. Totally pulled the reader out of the story. WTF is dwaddy? Give me a break.

INFANTILE JUVENILE FANTASY!

Raping the daughter while she's speaking baby talk.. really? was this written by a 10-year-old? Hmm, a virgin that knows about choking? a "nice" hotel that only has one twin bed in the room? A wife that he never found attractive, to begin with, but somehow produced a daughter that was his ideal type? And then the daughter thought that nothing would happen when they went home with bruising on her neck when daddy was kicked out for cheating on the bitch, to begin with? Oh yeah, I'm sure mommy will take care of the baby for them. Holy crap dude... you have zero clue! Please stop writing!