Kidnapped and Defiled Ch. 03

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He began a steady, driving rhythm, while Sven excitedly pushed deep into her helpless, though busy, mouth. Another sensation spread through her body; Fancha, naked between Junior's legs, was fondling her pussy with one, two three, four fingers, moving them in and out of her now soaking vagina. Every opening was filled; her whole body was soft, her tongue thrilled the big Swede while she attempted to squeeze Junior's cock in her muscular anal ring. She writhed under Fancha's skillful touch; she was soaked in sweat. Sven came in her mouth and she swallowed the liquid without breaking stride; Junior erupted in her ass.

Without a pause the two men switched places; Lois sucked the liquids from her ass from Junior's cock, which did not soften for a moment. Sven pushed into her asshole, which now gaped open, giving a glimpse of the soft wet rose velvet within. Fancha's fingers touched her in all her most sensitive places; her breasts were fondled, her ears licked, her hands spread her buttocks to enable the deepest entry into her ass. An overpowering surge of sensation, sweeter than honey, swept through her whole body; she began a wave of climax, crying out like a child, swept out of her mind, as with a drawn out roar the men climaxed simultaneously inside her.

Events after that became a blur; she drank a great deal of vodka, and at one point felt a dull pain when both men, their bodies contorted, had their cocks in her now opened ass at the same time. She lost track of the number of times they came in her mouth, her ass, and her pussy; she was given a break to observe the two men double penetrating a gasping, sobbing Fancha. Drunk, asswhipped, smeared with every kind of liquid, dripping come from her lower openings, her hair stiff with semen, Mrs. Atkinson finally passed out on the deck.

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love your work, Frank! I am a woman aged 36 and I've been reading you for years.

FrankHarris1FrankHarris1over 8 years agoAuthor
Blah, blah, blah

It wasn't pretending to be classic literature. More like pulp fiction. Once again, it is an homage to John D. Macdonald's Deep Blue Goodbye. If you read that, you can fill in the background info for yourself. Either way, appreciate your turgid, labored comment on what was only intended as fluff..

verbicideverbicideover 8 years ago
Dull

Okay, I read all three chapters and I have to say, I've found them kind of dull. There's alot going on and Lois is suffering greatly, but thus far Junior has zero personality and Fancha is simply a sadistic lickspittle. Hell, Lois isn't really well portrayed and except for knowing about her past and her mistake of associating with Junior, there's not much to her. There's also no rhyme or reason given for anyone's sadism or Junior's wealth despite his humble appearance in Biloxi, Miss as a simple mechanic.

To answer your question as to why someone might find the story unpalatable, but be looking in Non-consent/ RELUCTANCE category, it's because a well-written reluctance story delves into the psychological aspects of the situation, examining motives and reactions of attacker, victim or both. This story is does nothing of the kind and is simply a diary of abuse and thus someone who's hoping for a more nuanced, well written, fully imagined story may be disappointed or even revolted by it.

Me? I just find it boring. Lois has no personality and her captors are two-dimensional, moustache-twirling villains, who tie her up and rape her as opposed to putting her across railroad tracks.

spankfunforspankfunforalmost 9 years ago
The Good Life!

Junior has Made a Good Life for Himself! I Presume He has a Means of Self-Support or Lois Will Pay His Bills! Fancha and Lois Sexual Doing are Well-Described! More of This Story Would be Appreciated!

FrankHarris1FrankHarris1almost 9 years agoAuthor
Seek professional help?

Actually I love women. I'm curious though why, if you are so offended by this story, you are browsing in the Non-Consent area.

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