All Comments on 'Kidnapped by Daddy Figure'

Thank you for your first story, Wynter. Until the end, I wasn't sure if this was an actual kidnap/noncon or a fake scene between consenting people. Lit has a separate category for noncon/reluctance stories. Most bdam readers are a bit protective of this category as it already gets a bad rap from those not into it. BDSM is consent based, so future damsel in distress stories ought to be posted in noncon. If you make it clear it is a fantasy scene between partners, then it can go here.

The scene is well written. I would suggest writing in past tense as most readers are more familiar with it. I liked that you didn't use name calling and violence beyond the obvious. This was straight up about the sex and not having a choice but to experience what was happening. Keep writing.

this is amazing

it is Non-con, why is it here? 1*

Good story...hoping there will be another chapter to explain who he is, why he chose her, what does he intend to do with her (keep her or eventually let her go?). I agree with the other comments though...this should be in the Non Con category. Just because she was tied to a chair doesn't make it BDSM. Looking forward to more stories by you. 4 stars

Thank you so much for clarifying between non con and BDSM! I will definitely be more careful in the future. How can I change the category in this current story? I'm new here.

Warmly,

WynterIsComing

I think this is honestly one of my favourite pieces of erotica. I like noncon that’s more about the fear angle (not certain why, but I do), and this did a great job with that. This is getting bookmarked - I’d be so excited if you made it a series. The setup is certainly there. Thanks for writing it.

I love that line - "...this is what you were born to do..." Hot!

This is right up my alley. If you aren't already you should really consider continuing with this story; even just another chapter or so because it is really great.

Loved this.

This sounds like a chapter from a novel. It could be a great story. I would love to read more and see how their story ends :)

WynterIsComing this is a fantastic start to your story - i defo think though it is better in Non- Con unless you are planning to add more BDSM into it. But its certainly a good start , im a sub and im dabbling a little in the CnC side of BDSM

Looking forward to another story or a continuation of this one.

Best writing I've read in a very long time! You had me wet before he even touched her lol. Please keep writing!

xx

SkinTight42 on kik

Very nice, Thank You for the hot exciting story.

Wish it was longer

That was so good. He sounds so hot. Great quickie.

Bring on chapter 2 where he knocks her up, and his baby has a baby